mcjlsat
Tue Sep 27 23:13:05 2011
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| My Review of Watch Me Bleed by
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good write  |
| i really loved this poem and the emotion behind it. i can feel the anger and the fear in this poem. my only critisism would be the flow of the last verse. it seems kind of off or forced. but keep up the good work (: |
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:05:43 2011
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Wed Jul 6 01:04:01 2011
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| My Review of 23 by
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interesting  |
| i liked it. it was quite interesting and informative. thanks (: |
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:02:23 2011
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| My Review of Laundromat by
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| i liked it :) |
it's kind of whimsical. reminds me alot of helping my parents do laundry as a child. keep up the good work  |
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:00:55 2011
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mcjlsat
Fri May 13 03:10:27 2011
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| My Review of Tired by
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hmmmm  |
| i am quite confused by this. i don't know if there is a hidden meaning or not. |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:57:42 2010
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| My Review of The Strong by
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| wow |
| i really can relate to this. its deep and powerful. thanks for sharing. keep on going |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:55:11 2010
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| My Review of Upside Down World by
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breathtaking  |
| i loved it. it made me feel hope. and a whole mixture of emotions. thanks |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:47:44 2010
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:41:26 2010
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| My Review of Empowerment by
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| awestruck |
| wow. i can really connect with this poem. its really deep and speaks to me. thanks |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:38:29 2010
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| My Review of Catch a Tear by
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| inspirational |
| i really loved this. if only everyone could understand where others are coming from. thanks |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:32:24 2010
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| My Review of . : Autumn's Tears : . by
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| Amazing |
| wow. that's so intense. and yet thats how i feel with my family. im so glad that you shared this. thank you |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:28:31 2010
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| My Review of You're On Your Own by
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| Amazing |
| wow. that brought up so many emotions. im actually sitting hear wiping away tears. i loved that. thanks for sharing |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:22:14 2010
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| My Review of Secrets by
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| that was so good it gave me chills. thanks so much for sharing. keep up the good work |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:05:08 2010
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| My Review of In the Dark by
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| wow |
| i loved it. that's exactly how i feel. great work. keep it going |
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:03:32 2010
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mcjlsat
Thu Mar 18 22:22:44 2010
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mcjlsat
Thu Jan 21 09:46:06 2010
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| My Review of Love of Christ by
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great  |
| i really liked this. it has a nice flow. you dont need to rhyme to make it work. good job |
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mcjlsat
Tue Jan 19 21:45:01 2010
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:46:22 2010
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| My Review of my love for you... by
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| amazing |
| that was really good. i liked how you put yourself into that poem. good job |
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:42:16 2010
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| My Review of Denial by
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| good :) |
| i really liked it. it was very passionate. keep up the good work |
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:41:12 2010
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| My Review of Hurt by
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| good |
| it was pretty good but the rhyming was a bit off. it seemed forced |
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 14:46:48 2010
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mcjlsat
Sun Jan 17 21:41:25 2010
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