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mcjlsat
Tue Sep 27 23:13:05 2011

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My Review of Watch Me Bleed by Music
good write
i really loved this poem and the emotion behind it. i can feel the anger and the fear in this poem. my only critisism would be the flow of the last verse. it seems kind of off or forced. but keep up the good work (:
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:05:43 2011

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My Review of My Life Ended When You Said Goodbye!! by carolann
relatable
i like this because it can relate to almost every person. nice rhyming. keep up the good work
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:04:01 2011

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My Review of 23 by Siyass
interesting
i liked it. it was quite interesting and informative. thanks (:
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:02:23 2011

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My Review of Laundromat by StevenHunley
i liked it :)
it's kind of whimsical. reminds me alot of helping my parents do laundry as a child. keep up the good work
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mcjlsat
Wed Jul 6 01:00:55 2011

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My Review of That Someone Watching by SummerFairy
i liked it
pretty good. keep up the good work.
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mcjlsat
Fri May 13 03:10:27 2011

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My Review of Tired by LonelyRomeo
hmmmm
i am quite confused by this. i don't know if there is a hidden meaning or not.
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:57:42 2010

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My Review of The Strong by SheaRyhai
wow
i really can relate to this. its deep and powerful. thanks for sharing. keep on going
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:55:11 2010

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My Review of Upside Down World by SheaRyhai
breathtaking
i loved it. it made me feel hope. and a whole mixture of emotions. thanks
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:47:44 2010

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My Review of Life's About the Journey by nataliemccart
wow
just... wow. im speechless

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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:41:26 2010

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My Review of Empowerment by SheaRyhai
awestruck
wow. i can really connect with this poem. its really deep and speaks to me. thanks
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:38:29 2010

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My Review of Catch a Tear by SheaRyhai
inspirational
i really loved this. if only everyone could understand where others are coming from. thanks
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:32:24 2010

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My Review of . : Autumn's Tears : . by SheaRyhai
Amazing
wow. that's so intense. and yet thats how i feel with my family. im so glad that you shared this. thank you
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:28:31 2010

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My Review of You're On Your Own by Shadows
Amazing
wow. that brought up so many emotions. im actually sitting hear wiping away tears. i loved that. thanks for sharing
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:22:14 2010

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My Review of Secrets by Citygrlsepihany
wow
that was so good it gave me chills. thanks so much for sharing. keep up the good work
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:05:08 2010

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My Review of In the Dark by LinZeHstAr
wow
i loved it. that's exactly how i feel. great work. keep it going
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mcjlsat
Mon Sep 13 11:03:32 2010

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My Review of The Meaning of Love by VioletViolence
OmG
That is exactly how i feel... made me cry. i loved it. thanks for sharing
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mcjlsat
Thu Mar 18 22:22:44 2010

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My Review of Gifts Of Life by Amandamic21
amazing
i really liked this. it spoke to me. great job
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mcjlsat
Thu Jan 21 09:46:06 2010

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My Review of Love of Christ by kingskid
great
i really liked this. it has a nice flow. you dont need to rhyme to make it work. good job
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mcjlsat
Tue Jan 19 21:45:01 2010

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My Review of " CARCINOGINS of the MOUTH " by andycapped
good
i liked it
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:46:22 2010

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My Review of my love for you... by mckoy32
amazing
that was really good. i liked how you put yourself into that poem. good job
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:42:16 2010

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My Review of Denial by mznini
good :)
i really liked it. it was very passionate. keep up the good work
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mcjlsat
Mon Jan 18 20:41:12 2010

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My Review of Hurt by lightinthedark
good
it was pretty good but the rhyming was a bit off. it seemed forced
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mcjlsat
Sun Jan 17 21:41:25 2010

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My Review of Nothing Melts the Heart Deceit by honestywins
great
excellent. loved it
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mcjlsat
Sat Jan 16 19:58:41 2010

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My Review of Sarang-Hae by lightinthedark
good
loved it
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mcjlsat
Sat Jan 16 19:57:37 2010

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My Review of Always by kntinaz
good
great flow;. really good piece
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