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Topic: Haiku Prompt: The One You Love  (Read 31424 times)    
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October 10, 2010, 05:54:18 PM
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Write a haiku about the first time you saw the person you love(d) most.
Was it love at first sight or indifference? Funny or sweet?

Haiku:
first line 5 syllables, second line 7 syllables, third line 5 syllables
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October 11, 2010, 11:08:50 AM
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Hey! Listen! - Navi



 rose

Woman

Beautiful Woman,
Sitting across the table,
Should I say something?


 rose
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"You can't make the bees produce the honey, they have to decide to do it on their own."  - Me thinking one night when I was half asleep.
 

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October 15, 2010, 06:24:42 PM
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Hi, may I join?
Nice coffee here.
Very cozy restaurant too.
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October 26, 2010, 09:42:09 PM
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Hi, may I join?
Nice coffee here.
Very cozy restaurant too.

Hey I don't mean to down your writing but you used the wrong amount of syllables in each line. Just though t I'd point that out. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I mean, I liked it. It just isn't correctly written, if it is supposed to be a haiku
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"You can't make the bees produce the honey, they have to decide to do it on their own."  - Me thinking one night when I was half asleep.
 

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October 27, 2010, 10:26:27 AM
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This is my first writing prompt here, thought I'd give it a go.  Thank you for providing inspiration.  This is in response to Haiku Prompt:  The One You Love


by wings2fly2heaven
Written October 26, 2010



Eyes lock mesmerized

Two souls share only one heart 

Our mirror image

« Last Edit: October 27, 2010, 10:29:37 AM by wings2fly2heaven, Reason: I did not need to capitalize \"M\" in mirror. » Logged
 

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October 29, 2010, 10:03:03 AM
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We met only once
But I knew your every thought
I still think of you
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November 14, 2010, 12:16:07 PM
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Prosperity, my success
Woman's charm fascinates my being
My name is Mr. Brilliant
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I used to have an open mind but my brains kept falling out. What else can I say? When you're right, no one remembers. When you're wrong, no one forgets.
 

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November 15, 2010, 01:07:44 PM
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blue eyes showed surprise
and a quick response that smile -
beauty in waiting
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November 22, 2010, 11:53:57 AM
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a face like no other
Why, It is an angel's face alright
A face like no other
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death is a very saddening thing.. but sometimes you ask for it. don't do anything reckless. spend your days with them. or not. it will be too late to laugh love live or cry with them anymore.. it will be too late to give them a better future. too late to buy them gifts or kisses..it will be too late
 

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November 28, 2010, 08:05:27 PM
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My Heart Is Bursting
Her Touch, her Smile, her Eyes
New and Inviting

technically Smile is one syllable but when you say it, it seems like it's two, so I cheated
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January 08, 2011, 11:06:48 AM
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Wicked and ruthless;
masked by smiling innocence.
Oh, how addicting.
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January 22, 2011, 03:51:55 PM
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If only a mean word was the worst of my pains.....



Your name makes my heart
Race, your playing enchants me,
Say "I love you" please.
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"I will not engage in a battle of wits with and unarmed opponent"-unknown
"If you love something let it go" But what if I don't want to?
 

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January 28, 2011, 06:09:23 AM
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What A Mystery,
A Beautiful Mystery,
A Handsome Stranger.
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February 17, 2011, 06:44:15 PM
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Her face so perfect
Could she ever love me?
Now I know not me :unlove:
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February 21, 2011, 10:18:30 AM
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Life has no release
Drain by the from fangs of love
I'm to dry to weep
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March 02, 2011, 12:33:29 AM
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Aww, I like this  :hug:

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A click in me, and
I knew I could never be
happy with out him

II

He's cute, oh, he sees
I was watching him, turn and
look away, smiling
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April 18, 2011, 10:11:24 AM
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monkey see monkey do



Oh she, the mirage

As I thirst in this desert

Can I smell perfume?
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April 23, 2011, 10:56:27 AM
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When We Met

When I saw you there
Reaching across the office
A hand in the crowd

You said a quick hi
Then you went back to your work
But still you saw me

Our love quickly grew
Blossoming like a flower
And it still survives
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April 25, 2011, 03:04:20 PM
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Don't tell me the truth



Eyes blue and shinnig
Hair just like a ray of light
Forever in love
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Once, you said you loved me, once, I did, too.
But you never understood, I'm a liar just like you.
 

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July 06, 2011, 05:10:56 PM
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Write a haiku about the first time you saw the person you love(d) most.
Was it love at first sight or indifference? Funny or sweet?

Haiku:
first line 5 syllables, second line 7 syllables, third line 5 syllables
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