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September 14, 2009, 10:48:01 PM
Zooberrymagic
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    The world is full of mysteries,
some shallow, some deep,
if we continue to unravel them
the tea-bag of truth will steep.
How often can we stumble though?
How often are our minds too weak?
     Are half the people in this land under a deep sleep?
We'll never know it all, that's true.
But to enter the cavern, to go right through, helps
to comprehend the complexities, to find proof of what is true, however,
is our best, the very best, even the best that we can do?
We must never limit ourselves, we must always find new ways,
for it is in our minds where journeys lie, not castles nor old caves.
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September 15, 2009, 10:05:58 AM
ThePriestess
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Clap Clap this is very good.  Thank you for sharing.
So very true are your words.

Take care,Timmie
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May the energy of the Moon shine brightly upon you throughout your life's journey!!!!!
 

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November 30, 2009, 10:54:01 AM
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It started out really good. But you lost me after We will never know it all. Still its good.
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February 18, 2010, 02:51:22 PM
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I liked it it sort of latches on to you in a good way smile

good job :clap:
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