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January 22, 2009, 10:48:33 PM
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It was a hot summer night in Mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere.
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February 06, 2009, 10:54:08 AM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
It was a hot summer night in Mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere.
I found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite kind of steak, medium rare.


wow that was crap. oh well
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February 16, 2009, 05:14:36 PM
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What's the cost of happiness?
Quote from: Dark_Death on February 06, 2009, 10:54:08 AM
It was a hot summer night in Mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere.
I found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite kind of steak, medium rare.


wow that was crap. oh well

Goes with the crap restaurant, I suppose? =P

It was a hot summer night in Mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere.
I found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite kind of steak, medium rare.
But the side of fries, I did not dare,
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February 18, 2009, 06:16:52 PM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear

xD o wow that was a two-second thing
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Death... We all know of it, yet we all fear its aura.  It leaves behind a lingering odor and commotion of emotions we wish not to organize. Some wish to shy away, yet we all end up meeting it someday.  Some open their arms gratefully when that day comes... I wish to be one of those people.
 

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February 23, 2009, 05:07:10 PM
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it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear
thats the only pair i ever did wear
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February 25, 2009, 09:13:49 AM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
Quote from: jmfkiddo on February 23, 2009, 05:07:10 PM
it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear
thats the only pair i ever did wear
it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear
thats the only pair i ever did wear
they're so good, my mother wanted me to share

0.o......................................
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Death... We all know of it, yet we all fear its aura.  It leaves behind a lingering odor and commotion of emotions we wish not to organize. Some wish to shy away, yet we all end up meeting it someday.  Some open their arms gratefully when that day comes... I wish to be one of those people.
 

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March 06, 2009, 11:13:37 AM
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What's the cost of happiness?
Quote from: Dark_Death on February 25, 2009, 09:13:49 AM
Quote from: jmfkiddo on February 23, 2009, 05:07:10 PM
it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear
thats the only pair i ever did wear
it was a hot summer night in mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere
i found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare
but the side of fries, i did not dare
for i am allergic and rather like my underwear
thats the only pair i ever did wear
they're so good, my mother wanted me to share

0.o......................................

It was a hot summer night in Mississippi when my car broke down in the middle of nowhere,
I found a crap restaurant and ordered my favorite steak, medium rare,
But the side of fries, i did not dare,
For i am allergic and rather like my underwear,
That's the only pair i ever did wear,
They're so good, my mother wanted me to share,
But they give my neighbors such a scare!
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March 11, 2009, 10:54:31 AM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
because they had never seen a lady so fair (tis me, folks, j/k)
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Death... We all know of it, yet we all fear its aura.  It leaves behind a lingering odor and commotion of emotions we wish not to organize. Some wish to shy away, yet we all end up meeting it someday.  Some open their arms gratefully when that day comes... I wish to be one of those people.
 

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March 25, 2009, 08:28:19 AM
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Likened to the color of a pear.

Oh wait, thats green!
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March 25, 2009, 01:45:07 PM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
oh that is amazing
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Death... We all know of it, yet we all fear its aura.  It leaves behind a lingering odor and commotion of emotions we wish not to organize. Some wish to shy away, yet we all end up meeting it someday.  Some open their arms gratefully when that day comes... I wish to be one of those people.
 

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April 08, 2009, 10:54:20 PM
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April 14, 2009, 11:12:46 AM
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Why do we have hearts when they break so easily?
and i wish i had green hair
similar to the lady who looks like a pear

................................................0.o
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Death... We all know of it, yet we all fear its aura.  It leaves behind a lingering odor and commotion of emotions we wish not to organize. Some wish to shy away, yet we all end up meeting it someday.  Some open their arms gratefully when that day comes... I wish to be one of those people.
 

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May 23, 2009, 07:39:05 PM
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-bet.gamble.win-
 :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: tongue rofl







 ???don't know what to put, lol. :help: :help: :help:


 :kiss: :oops: big grin
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July 05, 2009, 04:37:58 PM
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Even if some people would jeer.
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October 08, 2009, 10:40:38 PM
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Then one day I've been mulled by a bear!!!
And he ate my steak that was medium rare...



So random...
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November 16, 2009, 10:34:09 AM
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And he gave me quite a glare
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April 12, 2010, 11:25:37 AM
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I love fairies
This life is just not fair
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April 26, 2010, 01:03:19 PM
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I got a new life, in the circus fair
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Why live in grief when there's no fun in it - DeviantWriter88

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May 07, 2010, 04:04:50 PM
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The next sentence is true.
I'm worried there's no one governing this poem;
For if there is, he must be laissez-faire
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May 10, 2010, 02:57:44 PM
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I agree to the post above,
for this is so unfair
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