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[ladyluxe]

Hey everyone...

A few months ago I decided to put pen to paper (well, in my case, fingers to a keyboard) and tell the story of my circle of friends here in Dubai. Desperate in Dubai is inspired by real places, real events and real people and is a mix between Sex and the City and Desperate Housewives - but the Dubai version of course!!

Would love to get some feedback.

Please visit: http://desperateindubai.blogspot.com

Thanks

[Calrootpeg]

You write for sure and have an interesting web site.  More plot, less descriptive narrative.  The trip to the door took a paragraph.  The package opening took a few.  I gave up half way, but your writing is good. Maybe trying for an e-book?  Guess diary style writing is in now, I see it allot.  Personal stories written-out in story form... I have one too...lol... there it sits.  Besides men, and self esteem problems, I'm not sure where the story is going.  HOWEVER, to be fair I read only 1/2 of Chp Two, and part of the end, so what do I know.  Write-on to finish!