Don't mean to repost, but zero views on the last one?

Maybe this less self-important subject will help.
I'm trying to see if I can successfully captivate an audience. The first two chapters of a detective story are up on my page--can anybody please please please check out the first one, and only read the the second chapter if they legitimately want to?
Comments on Chapter 2 are so intensely appreciated
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