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[lestatgirl]

write a poem about heartbreak. it's one of the best insperations in the entire poet's comunity!

[sweetchic2008]

Here is my poem about heartbreak.

Why?

Why did you do this to me?
You had me really feeling you.
Then you had to shatter it all.
 
Why did you do this to me?
You told me all this sweet stuff.
Were you just saying all the right things?
Did you mean anything you told me?
 
Why did you do this to me?
Everything I said to you,
Everything I said about my feeling,
Everything I told you about myself,
Was TRUE.
 
Why did you do this to me?
Please tell me.
Let me know what I did so wrong.
Just tell me what's going on with you.
Please tell me how much of what you said was TRUE.
Just tell me you don't want me anymore.
Then you can tell me.
Why did you do this to me?

[PandaP1]

Taken by your words
I open my heart
You destroyed my Trust
My tears were not caught

You took my soul
Lit it on fire
Walked away with laughter
Yes, your heart is a Liar.

[angela]

Blinded  by  love,
How  I  was  a  fool.
I  trusted  my  heart  to  you.
Secret's  I  kept, 
No  longer  I  keep.
Now  they  lay
Broken  at  my  feet.
You  told  me  to  trust  you.
Your  love  was  so  sweet.
You  made  it  so  easy,
TO fall  for  you.
Telling  me  lies, 
You  never  meant  to  keep.
Now  your  gone,
You said  you'd  never  leave. 
But  as  ashes  turn  to  dust.
And  a  cold  an  empty  grave,
Stares  back  at  me.
Tears  fell  my  eyes, 
As I  find  you  lied  to me  again.

[monyx]

this is an exert from one of my poems....the original is pretty long and so i just used part of it for this......anyways maybe someone will like it....


if heaven were a place
if heaven were a feeling
if heaven were a day
it would be inside my bed on a rainy day
with her body right next to mine
with a feeling u cant explain
i loved that girl more than anything
i still love her til this day
but its been so many months now
and u wonder why it had to end this way
you try as hard as u can to make these feelings go away
so why i ask so why i ask
did they take me away
and lock me up where i could not return
and made her go away
why is it that i could not go home
and i still wonder til this day
why is it that i could not be with her
why until this day
there was always a chance to try and try again
but now the moment that i loved most will never be again
with the girl i loved most i will never be with again
and making love is but gone
and i will never feel it again


feel free to check out my other poetry...on my profile.....i will put this one up sometime...the original in its entirety that is.....later

[Tera14P]

WHAT THE HELL?
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?That's what i thought the whole time
My friend that's who she was supposed to be
She flirted and i ignored
He flirted back but i payed no attention
They wen't out but i knew she was a slut
it was only for one thing and baby it wasn't no ring
So I left it alone
Then I used my gift and exspressed my fellings in a poem.
She was bugging me
can i give it to him she kept asking
I couldn't take it anymore so i said sure
at the lunch table she gave it to him
one of his boys snatched it
reading it to the whole class
oh no i thought then i santched it even though i wanted to kick his ass
my boo
he didn't say a word
he laughed about it in my face
and he even tried to ignore me and act as though he pittied me
so i let it go once again
but no worries this wasn't the end i was only 13 many more fish in the sea many more boys looking at me
so after that for some reason i had found myself i was happy it was over still i felt something for this person but i knew it colud never be i was heart broken
no oonger loved by anyone :cry: ???

[MelFarmer16]

Watching you love someone else,
makes my heart cry.
When you talk to me,
my heart beats ever so fast.
Even the simplest hello,
makes me smile.
My heart sings,
to your loving melody.
When you speak her name,
My heart aches.
When you speak the love for her,
My heart breaks.
For the love that beats heavily in my heart,
I will shed a tear.
But the love I have for you,
Will make me smile,
while I am shedding tears.

[MistakenBeauty]

It's Not Just Another Beautiful Day


I hope in a few months when you see me walking down your street
Smoking a cigarette and singing those same dumb songs
You look out at me and think
Why did I ever give that up
I hope that you see me with him
And regret ever giving up on us
I hope that when it's all been forgotten
You remember

[Dark_Death]

i actually have a few here...

Break up!
the pain was real
all i could feel
was my broken heart
you ignored me from the start

"we're only friends!" you would say
but you would always stay away
you had her contact information
our relationship was a total devastation

but i moved on now
and you are still with that cow
to let you know, i hate you
and i know you hate me too


Your Unwanted Child

she is hanging hopelessly at your heel
how come you cant feel
at least an ounce of love
or do you want an infant from above?

no one is perfect, you should know
but you would rather act like a crow
and show not a little sympathy
because she shows no beauty

you wish the poor thing was dead
and she saw where her life led
and realized she was an unwanted child
alone with her thoughts that were running wild

now you stand at her burial site
the truth hurts like a dog bite
for she brutally commited suicide
and you know, because of you, she died

Dead Inside

"save her," the angels cry,
"if you dont then you will die."
their voices ringing in your ears
you look up and see their falling tears

slowly your sweetheart bows her head
and you knew that she was dead
the ambulance came too late
and the poor girl knew her fate

it had all happened too fast
you hoped the car would go past
but the drunk driver swerved off the road
it was slick because it snowed

you stared in horror as the white turned to red
you wished you had gone instead
but it wasn't your time to go
fate never has mercy to show

the funeral was the worst of all
you stayed in the bathroom stall
you couldn't handle all of the pain
you cried because your life was stained

a few weeks later the pain took control
you started drugs and alcohol
wore black and joined a gang
stayed out untill the midninght church bell rang

your true friends began to worry now
and you began to wonder how
a good God would let this happen to her
soon your thoughts began to blur

then you remembered wha the angels said
as you lay awake in bed
and realized that they were right
to you the thought was as dark as night

the angels were right, you died inside
because their advice you didn't abide
now all you feel is death and curse
the drugs are only making it worse

[Trudogger]

I thought I might try my hand at this. This one isn't really poetry, or at least my style, but I knew that if I tried to make it rhyme it would suck out the value.

Try As You May

How could something so little
Hurt so much when it's touched
Mine was ripped out and stomped upon
It was dissected and squeezed
Mine was rolled down a gravel road
And left to beat, bleeding and bruised
All that matters was that it was alive
To spit in the face of my new enemy and say
You cannot break me, not today sir

[Poetic_Rain]

Mirror

another tear drop falls
on the engraved stone
rose petals falling
Red petals and crystal tears
Flood the earth with our sadness
Night comes, stars rise
And still you stand staring down
At what was left that was somthing to you
That name so familiar
Written by your pen so many times
This name all but forgotten now
Now you must leave this place
But one last glance at the name
And in the mirror...

[chaotic_chelsea]

                                       untitled.
                                  
                                   you thought you knew, you had no clue
                                                            you think im fine
                                              you must not know.
      
                                  im truly heartbroken all the times you leave, you go.
                                                  you call it addiction,you say that i just dont know.
                                         that if i were in your position,
                                                       that neither would i be capable of letting it go.
                                                                        you are so wrong.
                                   you can justify it all you want.
                                                but it wasnt right to leave me in random houses
                                                                     all alone
                             i did try to understand,
                                                   but you never got better.
                  you said you were cured but i know what it makes people look like first hand.
                                             the things i do, to try and escape,
                                                              work insufficently,
                                                                                             until i BREAK.
                             all the feellings i now know not what to do with, only know how to hide.
                                       all of this shit, eating me inside.
 i loose my will, you may have lost your wings to fly.
                                                                         i have no doubt, that in prison is where you shall shrivel up and die.
                                          so i guess this is farewell. goodbye.  

[TristaJay]

Sidewalk Chalk

Release me now
Take your pain
Years of memories
One day's rain

[TheSadist]

Short poem, you say?

Repetition
Darkness or darkless,
the end is always the same:
A throat full of hate.

[Anniepimm]

SURRENDER

I saw the light but refused it,
I was offered a place by "God's" side,
It would of been so Easy,
If i had just surrender and died,

The light was so inviting,
The warmth of the glow hard to resist,
All i had to do was surrender,
But again i decided to resist,

A soothing voice started to call to me,
This way! its easy you see,
All you have to do is let go,
And bring yourself to me,

Again i heard in the distance,
Do it again this time do it right,
Clear the command was spoken,
I was dragged back away from the light,

Thank god i heard a voice say,
Thank god she is back from the dead,
Your going to be alright now,
Your staying with us instead

Annie..13-7-2008

[jj_angel]

If I could bring you back to life,
I would.
I would give you my heart so you survived.
I needed you here, but you got taken from me,
the pain is so deep, the other half of me is you
Just come to me in my dreams,
and I feel so much better
If not in reality I know there
we are together
My love never forgotton,
but you left my heart shattered.

[Toyz85]

my days were brighter,
it felt like my footsteps were lighter,
like i was floating on air,
with the mare thought of you here,
with me,
how forever and eternally it was meant to be
the beat was so strong and i knew i was alive,
i knew with u by my side i would always survive,
then 1 day u took my heart and broke it,
u through it in the air and it fell with a thud,
u picked it up drained the blood then u stamped on my heart,
now i carry a grudge,
u broke my trust,
i no longer lust,
for you,
you were untrue,
now my heart barely has a beat,
now instead of feeling light on my feet,
my heart burns with your deceit,
you killed my love if flew from my chest like a beautiful dove,
you broke my heart
you abused my love!

[VictoriaN]

          Why did you leave me babe?

         Why won't you let me explain?
     
         Explain your infidelity!
        You left me  purposeless
        I felt meaningless
        Now I look at you though am tortured
         I must say you are a rose meant for the grave

        Plz a second chance

        You are defenseless
                    motionless
          it's to late to turn the clock
                                 clockwise.
         I hate you, I love you
        But I am heart broken.

write a poem about heartbreak. it's one of the best insperations in the entire poet's comunity!

[Bluesky]

My heartbreak poem
It was as if the cold had found me
harshly burning my aching body
kissing my blood dripping lips
kicking my lonely heart to pieces
left for no one to pick up
eyes searching but nothing to find

Maybe someday you will look around
and see me
the one you left behind

[Jin_Lin]

True love false


You were my first to love.
I just stared at the sky above.
They say it's hard to forget.
And that always makes me upset.


After all my sacrifices
Even if you had so many vices
I still loved you with all my heart
Still you have to tear me apart.

Every time you lie,
Can't you see me die?
I just wanted a little love
A gentle peck like the dove.

But i guess your not serious.
You say words that are hideous.
Replaced me with someone dumb pretty girl.
Who knows nothing but to twirl.